Excellent! Recuerda usar más puntos en vez de tantas comas. Usaste gran variedad de vocabulario: I like it! Próxima vez, evita usar tanto traductor o intenta usarlo al mínimo (en la vida diaria no tendrás traductor todo el tiempo :| )

MY NAME IS ARIEL I´M 14 YEARS OLD WAS BORN ON MARCH 27 TH 2005 I´M WARRIOR I WAS BORN IN CHITARAQUE COLOMBIA MY MOTHER IS ROSSY.SHE IS A HOMEKEEPER I´M COLOMBIAN. MY FAVORITE COLOR IS RED

my name is: liseth
My Date of Birth: October 18, 2019
My favorite color is purple
My course: is the 802 grade
My mother: her name is Dara
My father: his name is Ercules

Hi guys and girls, my name is Laura but I am told Lalito. I was born on May 7, 2001, I am 18 years old. I am French, I live in Paris with my brothers and parents, my father is the greatest sorcerer and my mother is a strong warrior. my favorite color is red represents magic as a good spell, I like to defend the good and catch the bad guys, have the pleasure of meeting me. <3

my name: Pandora is the goddess of the underworld and the goddess of light

birth: in the temple of zeus

my nationality is Colombian

My date is year 1

Age: I'm 2019 years old My

favorite color: it is red by blood

my course: it's 802

My dad's name is zeus and my mother is athena

Occupation mom: goddess Occupation Father: God of Olympus

I am Magnus , I am fire mage , I am a descendant from a long line of mages , I was born in Britain , I am British , I study in New Age Heroes Academy , I'm 14 years old my favorite activity is riding dragons , I want to be a great magician , my Father Ingvar is a powerful Mage that protects the kingdom of Britain from invanders and terrorists , and my Mother is an expert in Space Magic a great scientist is called Elora Wwintersong and my father uses wind magic.

Hello, my name is Santiago, I am 17 years old, I was born on April 18, 2002 in Canada, I am Canadian, my favorite color is black and red, I am in tenth, my mother is a presenter in a perfume brand, instead my father works saving lives of people without self-control sick and more, convatating against the disobedience of society in their environment. Greetings to those who translated it.

HI,IM JUAN. IM FROM CALIFORNIA. IM 17 YERAS OLD

¡HELLO! I am Maria, my birthday is Octuber 3th, I am 21 years old, my favorite color is pink, my nationality is Spanish, I live with my parents and my sister, my father Luis, is 52 years old and his occupation is barber. Her mothers name is pilar, she is 42 years old. she is ocupation dressmaker, my sister Sofia is 7 years old, her ocupation is student.

Hello , i am Rihanna , my birthday is september 20th , i am 25 years old , my favorite color is blue , my nationality is mexican , i ilive with my parents and my brother , my father Gerdad, is 48 years old and his occupation is head of bas compony . her mother's mane is Selena , she is 40 years old . she is my father's assistant. my brother Alex is 16 years old . her occupation is student

my name is jenner. i was born in frace,i am 22 years old. my nationaly is french. my birth date is february 8 1997,my favorite colur is black. my mother name is kendall jenner her ocupation is the owner of a makeup factory my father name is fabian and he is penciominated

hello my name is harolt I'm from pensilvania I am 13 yearas old, I am rumania. my brith dathe is april 23rd, 2006. my favorite colour is blu my muther is maria and my fathe is pefro they work as worker and house wife

my name is Aihona I was born in costa rica I am is 15 years aold my nationality is costarican

my birth date is may 05th, 2005 . my favorite color is black my parents are jose and janeth

my fater is costructor and my mother is a nurse I am a warrior

Hi, my name is Miguel Black, I am 25 years old and I was born in Panama on September 15, 2004. My favorite color is blue

Hello! My name Pancracia Sanchez I am from Dubai and I am 16 years old. I was born in Hawuai on October 7, 2004. My favorite color is black my parents are called Marco and Isabela.

hello my name is Salome, I'm from Ecuador, I'm 17 years old, I was born on September 07th,2002.

my favorite colour is black and white, my parents liliana is my mother, camilo is my father, they are Ecuadorian, I'm healer.

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hello name is crishbeymon I'm 16 I was born in USA. I was born on December 25, 2003,I'm American. I really like the art, I live with my family, my mom's name is pink, my father's name is jhon. I am a healer,

My favorite color is green and purple.

Hi..!, My name is Mio..!.. I´m 15 years old, I was born on October 21th, 2004, I´m from Tokyo-Japan,.. My favorite color is green, I like to help others, and I´m here to learn new things, and practice for the future, my mother´s name is Tzuyu,She is 38 years old, She is one of the most reconized nurses for her amazing work, and my father´s name is Jackson,He is 43 years old, He is a reconized driver, for his great performance..

hello my name is elizabeth im from france im 15 years old in french i was born on september 24th ,2004. my favorite colour is black. im a healer, my fathers name is ruben, he is a wizard from a very recognized school, my mothers name is maria, she is a warrior from a karate school

hello my name is luna. I was born in a non-created world. I am 18 years old . my nationality is from an uncreated world. my birth day date is march 15 th 1982. my favorite color is purple. my parents are name beto and my mom is rosita. I am a healer.